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2018-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I can't understand what 'recurring dreams'means, so I will write about my past dreams. My fitst dream was to be a pork belly restaurant's owner. I still remamber how I wanted to name the restaurant. 'Pig is Pity'. My next dream was to be a ballerina or a police officer. And a next dream I had was a musical actress. Now, my dream is being novelist. But I think my dream will change again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Just never stop dreaming.

I know that you can be anything you want to be.

Thank you for sharing your dreams with me.

Always work hard to be successful.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

My fitst dream was to be a pork belly restaurant\'s owner.
>> My first dream was to be a pork belly restaurant\'s owner. 
I still remamber how I wanted to name the restaurant. \'Pig is Pity\'.
>> I still remember that I wanted to name the restaurant,  \"Pig is Pity\".
My next dream was to be a ballerina or a police officer.
>> Correct
And a next dream I had was a musical actress.
>> The next dream that I had was to star in a musical.
Now, my dream is being novelist.

>> Now, I want to be a novelist.

But I think my dream will change again.

>> However, I think my dream will change again.

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