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2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> How do you usually react in a surprising situation? I'm inclined to react excessively in surprising situation, so my friends use this tendency for mischief. Few month ago, there was a event that they surprise me by appearing suddenly. Because I saw horror movie with them shortly before, I got in haunted state already. I wanted to go to toilet during watching a horror movie, and friends of mine followed me silently. After that, they waited on the toilet's front door, and when I get out the toilet, they appear for me in order to surprise. Because I mistake they are murderer when watching them, I was so surprised that I fall down on floor and couldn't move for seconds. They raised me up while laughing and said that my haunted face was very funny to them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for the effort. Well, that was funny. It might have been a sick joke but if I saw this happen I would probably laugh as well. Your friends definitely had a good laugh. 

- T. Beth

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I\'m inclined to react excessively in surprising situation, so my friends use this tendency for mischief.

>>>> I\'m inclined to react excessively in a surprising situation, so my friends use this tendency for mischief.   

>>>> OR: I\'m inclined to react excessively in surprising situations, so my friends use these tendencies for mischief.     

Few month ago, there was a event that they surprise me by appearing suddenly.

>>>> Few months ago, there was an event where they surprised me by appearing suddenly.    

Because I saw horror movie with them shortly before, I got in haunted state already.

>>>> Because I saw a horror movie with them shortly before, I was already in a haunted state.     

I wanted to go to toilet during watching a horror movie, and friends of mine followed me silently.

>>>> I wanted to go to the toilet while we were watching a horror movie, and friends of mine followed me silently.      

After that, they waited on the toilet\'s front door, and when I get out the toilet, they appear for me in order to surprise.

>>>> After that, they waited at the toilet\'s front door, and when I get out the toilet, they suddenly appeared in front of me.     

Because I mistake they are murderer when watching them, I was so surprised that I fall down on floor and couldn\'t move for seconds.

>>>> Because I have mistaken them for criminals while looking at them, I was so surprised that I fell down on floor and couldn\'t move for seconds.      

They raised me up while laughing and said that my haunted face was very funny to them.

>>>> They helped me up while laughing and said that my haunted face was very funny to them.     


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