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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for the effort. Well, that was funny. It might have been a sick joke but if I saw this happen I would probably laugh as well. Your friends definitely had a good laugh.
- T. Beth
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I\'m inclined to react excessively in surprising situation, so my friends use this tendency for mischief.
>>>> I\'m inclined to react excessively in a surprising situation, so my friends use this tendency for mischief.
>>>> OR: I\'m inclined to react excessively in surprising situations, so my friends use these tendencies for mischief.
Few month ago, there was a event that they surprise me by appearing suddenly.
>>>> Few months ago, there was an event where they surprised me by appearing suddenly.
Because I saw horror movie with them shortly before, I got in haunted state already.
>>>> Because I saw a horror movie with them shortly before, I was already in a haunted state.
I wanted to go to toilet during watching a horror movie, and friends of mine followed me silently.
>>>> I wanted to go to the toilet while we were watching a horror movie, and friends of mine followed me silently.
After that, they waited on the toilet\'s front door, and when I get out the toilet, they appear for me in order to surprise.
>>>> After that, they waited at the toilet\'s front door, and when I get out the toilet, they suddenly appeared in front of me.
Because I mistake they are murderer when watching them, I was so surprised that I fall down on floor and couldn\'t move for seconds.
>>>> Because I have mistaken them for criminals while looking at them, I was so surprised that I fell down on floor and couldn\'t move for seconds.
They raised me up while laughing and said that my haunted face was very funny to them.
>>>> They helped me up while laughing and said that my haunted face was very funny to them.
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