homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
Come to think of it, I have studied English with you one month.
Time goes fast.
With your help, I can put my empty times to a good use.
To me, to learn Emglish means one of stimulations to my stagnant life.
Thank you Irene! Keep awaking me!
ESSAY: Tell me your most embarrassing story -- I promise not to judge! ^_^
I have many embarrassing stories as many as my age.
Here is one of my stories.
It was in my twenties as I remember.
I had a date with some guy, so I dressed up with fluttering silk one peice,
I walked down the street and found the guy finally in a crowd.
With pleasure, I jumped on the subway ventilator without notice to see him.
And suddenly air came out from down, My skirts flied like the Picture of Mariln Monroe.
I had to show every body what I wore inside my skirts.
The guy who I met that day had date with me thinking of my under wear.
And I was regretting Why I didn't wear more sexy underwear.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. ^-^ I really enjoyed reading your answer here. That was good. I mean, I agree, you should have worn a sexier underwear to complete the Marilyn Monroe act. He he he
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!Come to think of it, I have studied English with you one month.
>>> Come to think of it, I have been studying English with you for a month already.
Time goes fast.
Time goes fast.
>>> Time really goes by so fast.
With your help, I can put my empty times to a good use.
With your help, I can put my empty times to a good use.
>>> With your help, I could my free time to good use.
To me, to learn Emglish means one of stimulations to my stagnant life.
To me, to learn Emglish means one of stimulations to my stagnant life.
>>> For me, learning English stimulates my already stagnant life.
Thank you Irene! Keep awaking me!
>>> Thank you Irene! Keep waking me up!
ESSAY: Tell me your most embarrassing story -- I promise not to judge! ^_^
I have many embarrassing stories, as many as my age.
Thank you Irene! Keep awaking me!
>>> Thank you Irene! Keep waking me up!
ESSAY: Tell me your most embarrassing story -- I promise not to judge! ^_^
I have many embarrassing stories, as many as my age.
>>> Correct.
Here is one of my stories.
Here is one of my stories.
>>> Correct.
It was in my twenties as I remember.
It was in my twenties as I remember.
>>> I remember that I was in my twenties at that time.
I had a date with some guy, so I dressed up with fluttering silk one peice,
I had a date with some guy, so I dressed up with fluttering silk one peice,
>>> I was going on a date with some guy and I was wearing a one-piece fluttering silk dress/suit.
I walked down the street and found the guy finally in a crowd.
I walked down the street and found the guy finally in a crowd.
>>> I walked down the street until I finally found the guy among the crowd of people.
With pleasure, I jumped on the subway ventilator without notice to see him.
With pleasure, I jumped on the subway ventilator without notice to see him.
>>> With much excitement and carelessness, I jumped on the subway ventilator just to meet him.
And suddenly air came out from down, My skirts flied like the Picture of Mariln Monroe.
And suddenly air came out from down, My skirts flied like the Picture of Mariln Monroe.
>>> Suddenly, like the famous Marilyn Monroe scene, there was sudden gust of air from the vent which blew my skirts up.
I had to show every body what I wore inside my skirts.
I had to show every body what I wore inside my skirts.
>>> Everybody saw what I was wearing under my skirts.
The guy who I met that day had date with me thinking of my under wear.
The guy who I met that day had date with me thinking of my under wear.
>>> My date was probably thinking of my underwear during the entire duration of our outing.
And I was regretting Why I didn\'t wear more sexy underwear.
And I was regretting Why I didn\'t wear more sexy underwear.
>>> I really regret not wearing a sexy underwear.
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