Homework

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thanks for doing this homework.

In the Philippines, everyone is welcome to join the army. ^^

Hope to see you again next time and have more talk about things.

Take care!

~~May~~

1. If we had seen the film, we would not have bought the DVD..

>> If we had seen the film, we would not buy the DVD..
 2. I would go to the party, if you came with me.

>> I would go to the party, if you had come with me.
 3. If he studied the new words, he could get a good mark in the test.

>> If he studied the new words, he could have a good mark in the test.

Men in Korea must join the army if they don\'t have any problem of their health.

>> Men in Korea must join the army if they don\'t have any problem ON their health.

However, Women don\'t need to join it mandatorily.

>> Correct

Or >> However, women are not mandatory to join.

They can serve the army as a noncom or officer, if they chose it as their job. 

>> Correct 
As I know, many women apply for the job to become a soldier because people in Korea have been having a problem to get a job for a long time. 

>> As far as I know, many women apply for a military job because people in Korea have been having a problem to get a job for a long time. 
It could be stable job.

>> It could be a stable job.