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2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Well, when we live in the city, we can use cultural facilities more easy. And we can use internet faster than the countryside. Also, living in a city can make us get the information more easy. And a public establishment is well developed.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

It is very convenient to live in the city.

That\'s what you expressed in your composition.

I can appreciate the benefits more after reading.

Keep up the good work.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, when we live in the city, we can use cultural facilities more easy.
>> Well, when we live in the city, we can use cultural facilities more easily.
And we can use internet faster than the countryside.
>> The internet is faster than the one in the countryside.
Also, living in a city can make us get the information more easy.
>> Living in a city also gives us more access to information.
And a public establishment is well developed.

>> Public establishments are well-developed, too.

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