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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for sending this in, as always. Misunderstandings cannot be completely avoided, but it\'s good that you were able to solve it.
- T. Beth
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Of course, my professor live longer than me and have a lot of knowledge.
>>>>> Of course, my professor has lived longer than I did and is more knowledgeable.
However, because he is human too, he is not always correct, so there were event that I didn\'t agree with his opinions.
>>>>> However, because he also human, he is not always correct so there were times when I didn\'t agree with his opinion.
I usually try to follow his opinions even if I don\'t want to do like his opinions.
>>>>> I usually try to follow his opinion even if I don\'t want to do as he says.
But, in the case that it is very important for me, I disagree with his opinion and explain my idea.
>>>>> CORRECT.
>>>>> OR: But if it is very important for me, I disagree with his opinion and explain my idea.
Few months ago, there was a misunderstanding between him and me, and I disagreed with his suggestion.
>>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: Few months ago, we had a misunderstanding and I disagreed with his suggestion.
After keeping on taking with him, I realized that he didn\'t intend to use my future into his profit but help me up alone.
>>>>> After consecutive talks with him, I realized that he didn\'t intend to take advantage of me but help me stand on my own.
So, I agree with that, and misunderstanding on him was solved.
>>>>> So I ended up agreeing with him and the misunderstanding was solved.
After this event, I try to help his work more than before because I knew his sincere mind.
>>>>> After this incident, I tried to help him more than I did before because I knew his sincere intentions.
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