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2018-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Do you always agree with your professor's idea or opinion? Of course, my professor live longer than me and have a lot of knowledge. However, because he is human too, he is not always correct, so there were event that I didn't agree with his opinions. I usually try to follow his opinions even if I don't want to do like his opinions. But, in the case that it is very important for me, I disagree with his opinion and explain my idea. Few months ago, there was a misunderstanding between him and me, and I disagreed with his suggestion. After keeping on taking with him, I realized that he didn't intend to use my future into his profit but help me up alone. So, I agree with that, and misunderstanding on him was solved. After this event, I try to help his work more than before because I knew his sincere mind.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for sending this in, as always. Misunderstandings cannot be completely avoided, but it\'s good that you were able to solve it.

- T. Beth

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Of course, my professor live longer than me and have a lot of knowledge.

>>>>>  Of course, my professor has lived longer than I did and is more knowledgeable.  

However, because he is human too, he is not always correct, so there were event that I didn\'t agree with his opinions.

>>>>> However, because he also human, he is not always correct so there were times when I didn\'t agree with his opinion.     

I usually try to follow his opinions even if I don\'t want to do like his opinions.

>>>>> I usually try to follow his opinion even if I don\'t want to do as he says.    

But, in the case that it is very important for me, I disagree with his opinion and explain my idea.

>>>>> CORRECT.

>>>>> OR:  But if it is very important for me, I disagree with his opinion and explain my idea.  

Few months ago, there was a misunderstanding between him and me, and I disagreed with his suggestion.

>>>>> CORRECT. 

>>>> OR: Few months ago, we had a misunderstanding and I disagreed with his suggestion.   

After keeping on taking with him, I realized that he didn\'t intend to use my future into his profit but help me up alone.

>>>>>  After consecutive talks with him, I realized that he didn\'t intend to take advantage of me but help me stand on my own.  

So, I agree with that, and misunderstanding on him was solved.

>>>>>  So I ended up agreeing with him and the misunderstanding was solved. 

After this event, I try to help his work more than before because I knew his sincere mind.

>>>>>  After this incident, I tried to help him more than I did before because I knew his sincere intentions.  

 

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