Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.If you had to choose a planet to live in, what planet would you choose and why?
A.I would live on Earth if there were planets to live on.Because I live now.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Cat. ^^
That\'s a very good answer.
I\'m glad you like earth! ^^
I just hope the people who live in it try their best to make this world a better place.
~~t. Ally
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I would live on Earth if there were planets to live on.Because I live now.
>> I would live on earth even if there were other planets to live in, because I live here now.
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