homework

2018-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

1. If we had seen the film, _______________. b. we would not buy the DVD. 2. I would go to the party, _______________. b. if you come with me 3. If he studied the new words, _______________. c. he could have a good mark in the test Is it possible for women to join the army in your country? Give your reasons. -> Yes, of course. The man has not choice. Usually man go to the army. But the women has choice. And they are go to army ,they are have leader position. Don't have soldier position.

강사 첨삭

HI Seong! You did a good job in this homework. But the check the corrections below.

In the Philippines, everyone can join the army. ^^

~~May~~

1. If we had seen the film, _______________.
b. we would not buy the DVD.
>> CORRECT
2. I would go to the party, _______________.
b. if you come with me
>> I would go to the party,

c. he could have a good mark in the test
3. If he studied the new words, _______________.
c. he could have a good mark in the test
>> CORRECT
Yes, of course. The man has not choice. Usually man go to the army.
>> Yes, of course. Men don\'t have a choice. Men join the army mandatorily.
But the women has choice. And they are go to army ,they are have leader position. Don\'t have soldier position.

>> Women also has options to choose from. They join the army and they can have a position without doing any soldier trainings.

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