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2018-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What does your favorite beverage or drink remind you of? My favorite beverage is beer. I have many happy memory with my friends ,boyfriend and sister as well as I like alcohol :) I like to talk about that memories with them. I feel happy there are some people who come out immediately when i ask "let's go to drink beer" .

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]!


Thank you for sharing this with me.

I love how sentimental you are with the people you have in your life.

I hope you stay that way till you get old, so you could gain a lot of memories with your friends and family.

See you in class!


~~t. Ally



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My favorite beverage is beer.

>> CORRECT!


 I have many happy memory with my friends ,boyfriend and sister as well as I like alcohol :)

>> I have a lot of memories with my friends, boyfriend, and sister.


 I like to talk about that memories with them.

>> I like to talk about those memories with them.


 I feel happy there are some people who come out immediately when i ask \"let\'s go to drink beer\" .

>> I feel happy that there are people who would immediately say yes when I invite them to come and have some beer with me.


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