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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this with me.
I love how sentimental you are with the people you have in your life.
I hope you stay that way till you get old, so you could gain a lot of memories with your friends and family.
See you in class!
~~t. Ally
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My favorite beverage is beer.
>> CORRECT!
I have many happy memory with my friends ,boyfriend and sister as well as I like alcohol :)
>> I have a lot of memories with my friends, boyfriend, and sister.
I like to talk about that memories with them.
>> I like to talk about those memories with them.
I feel happy there are some people who come out immediately when i ask \"let\'s go to drink beer\" .
>> I feel happy that there are people who would immediately say yes when I invite them to come and have some beer with me.
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