homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
When you write an essay, you learn to express yourself in a more logical way and also you develop your writing skills, your vocabulary and your own writing style. All these activities require outstanding writing skills, which can be developed only by writing essays, and practicing. :)
Writing Task:
What is your dream house? Why do you like it? Explain your answer in five (5) sentences. (my dream house is there are two cute puppy in the house~!! i like puppy so much~
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elsa!
I loved your answer to our essay question for today. ^^
You are really a sweet girl.
I guess any house would do for you for as long as you have two cute puppies at home.
I hope you\'re doing great and I hope you\'d have a cute puppy someday.
See you again on Friday! :*
~Teacher Charry
my dream house is there are two cute puppy in the house~!!
>> My dream is to have a house with two cute puppies in it!
i like puppy so much~
>> I like puppies so much.
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