homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
It's very sunny day altough it's cold.
Winter comes finally.
I hope I don't catch a cold this winter and withstand harsh winter season.
Let's have a ginger tea for us!
Have a good day!
ESSAY: Would you rather live forever or until 100 years old? What would you like to do if you live forever?
Most of people want immoral life because we already know that we never can live forever.
I think over this question for a while.
In conclusion, I would rather choose limited live.
Most of all, I don't want to work forever to make money.
The thought of it makes me shaking my head.
If I can live forever, I may annoy me learning everything what I want to do such as languge, sports, cooking, gardening and so on.
With a second thughts,If I have enough money to live forever and on condition of never getting old ,
I say immeidately 'I want to live forever'.
I know that it's better living this life thuogh it's hard and unsafisfied than I died and buried alone in a dark.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Let\'s indeed have a cup of ginger tea! Cheers! ^_^
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It\'s very sunny day although it\'s cold.
>>> It\'s a sunny day though it\'s cold.
Winter comes finally.
>>> Winter came finally.
I hope I don\'t catch a cold this winter and withstand harsh winter season.
>>> I hope I don\'t catch a cold this winter and be able to withstand the harsh winter season.
Let\'s have a ginger tea for us!
>>> Let\'s have a cup of ginger tea!
Have a good day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Would you rather live forever or until 100 years old? What would you like to do if you live forever?
Most of people want immoral life because we already know that we never can live forever.
>>> Most people want an immoral life because we already know that we never can live forever.
I think over this question for a while.
>>> I thought/pondered over this question for a while.
In conclusion, I would rather choose limited live.
>>> In conclusion, I would rather choose a limited lifespan.
Most of all, I don\'t want to work forever to make money.
>>> Most of all, I don\'t want to work forever earning money.
The thought of it makes me shaking my head.
>>> The thought of it makes me shake my head.
If I can live forever, I may annoy me learning everything what I want to do such as language, sports, cooking, gardening and so on.
>>> If I get to live forever, it may be annoying to be following my dream of learning a new language, playing sports, cooking, gardening and so on.
With a second thughts,If I have enough money to live forever and on condition of never getting old ,
>>> On second thought, if I have a lot of money and can live forever, I might consider that.
I say immeidately \'I want to live forever\'.
>>> I would immediately say, \'I want to live forever\'.
I know that it\'s better living this life thuogh it\'s hard and unsafisfied than I died and buried alone in a dark.
>>> I know that it\'s better to live my life now than to eternally feel unhappy then being buried alone.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It\'s very sunny day although it\'s cold.
>>> It\'s a sunny day though it\'s cold.
Winter comes finally.
>>> Winter came finally.
I hope I don\'t catch a cold this winter and withstand harsh winter season.
>>> I hope I don\'t catch a cold this winter and be able to withstand the harsh winter season.
Let\'s have a ginger tea for us!
>>> Let\'s have a cup of ginger tea!
Have a good day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: Would you rather live forever or until 100 years old? What would you like to do if you live forever?
Most of people want immoral life because we already know that we never can live forever.
>>> Most people want an immoral life because we already know that we never can live forever.
I think over this question for a while.
>>> I thought/pondered over this question for a while.
In conclusion, I would rather choose limited live.
>>> In conclusion, I would rather choose a limited lifespan.
Most of all, I don\'t want to work forever to make money.
>>> Most of all, I don\'t want to work forever earning money.
The thought of it makes me shaking my head.
>>> The thought of it makes me shake my head.
If I can live forever, I may annoy me learning everything what I want to do such as language, sports, cooking, gardening and so on.
>>> If I get to live forever, it may be annoying to be following my dream of learning a new language, playing sports, cooking, gardening and so on.
With a second thughts,If I have enough money to live forever and on condition of never getting old ,
>>> On second thought, if I have a lot of money and can live forever, I might consider that.
I say immeidately \'I want to live forever\'.
>>> I would immediately say, \'I want to live forever\'.
I know that it\'s better living this life thuogh it\'s hard and unsafisfied than I died and buried alone in a dark.
>>> I know that it\'s better to live my life now than to eternally feel unhappy then being buried alone.
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