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2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Do you think there is a possibility for Artificial Intelligence to actually take over the earth? Why or why not? I think there is a possibility for AI to take over the earth becasue AI is developing rapidly. And I heard that AI has already been using in many ares such as robot and etc. Finally I am afraid I think have to come up with my new job that AI cannot take it over.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thank you for sending me your composition.

I agree with you. ^^

I am also feeling a bit of anxiety regarding the vast knowledge AI can learn if it were given the chance.

The posibilities are endless.

~~t. Ally

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I think there is a possibility for AI to take over the earth becasue AI is developing rapidly.

>> I think there is a possibility for AI to take over the earth because AI is developing quite rapidly.

And I heard that AI has already been using in many ares such as robot and etc.
>> And I heard that AI has already been used in many areas such as: robots and the like.

Finally I am afraid I think have to come up with my new job that AI cannot take it over.

>> I am also afraid of the fact that someday, I may have to come up with a new job that AI cannot take over for me.

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