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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You live in a peaceful community. I hope that I can visit your place someday and enjoy the peace and safe environment.
Have a good day!
~T. Kelly^^
What are the common social problems in your area?
My country is good at public peace,so I think, most of the Korean city includes our area don\'t have a social propblem.
>> My country\'s safety and security is stable so I think there are no social problems here.
But sometimes, there a lots of demonstration about politicion or economy in the Seoul.
>> But sometimes, there are lots of political or economic demonstrations in Seoul City.
Our area don\'t have a social problems.
>> But in our area, there aren\'t social problems.
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