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2018-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Hi Irene! I am very happy to talk with you and also, I learn from you a lot. You always make me ponder over many kinds of issue which I just pass by. Specially, I was interested in your opinion about the comfort women and politics today. HACUNAMATATA ! ESSAY: What do you think is the world's worst job? Why do you think so? What is then the world's best job? Personnally, I think that the worst job is an Artist. Espeicllay a creator is a very hard and painful job such as Painters or Writers. I've heard that a writter is the shortest life span cause of suffering from creating stories. I really understand how hard and distressful to creat a peice is. It 's hard to say What is the best job, because I konw that every job has its difficulty which we can never know before we work. Even a beggar should endure the outside weather changes and they have to put up with people's refusal or insultation. Let's think lke that my job I chose is the best job in the world!

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday [이름]!  Yes! Hacunamatata! It means no worries! I like that!  Don\'t worry about tomorrow because God will take care of you.  So you watched the movie Lion King. I did too. ^_^

~T. Irene~

Hi Irene!
I am very happy to talk with you and also, I learn from you a lot. 

>>> I am always happy talking to you because I learn a lot from you.
 You always make me ponder over many kinds of issue which I just pass by. 

>>> You make me ponder upon the issues around me.
 Specially, I was interested in your opinion about the comfort women and politics today. 

>>> I, especially, got interested in your opinion regarding those comfort women and politics these days.
 HACUNAMATATA !  
ESSAY: What do you think is the world\'s worst job? Why do you think so? What is then the world\'s best job? 
Personnally, I think that the worst job is an Artist. 

>>> Personally, I think that the worst job is that of an artist. 
 Espeicllay a creator is a very hard and painful job such as Painters or Writers.

>>> Being a creator is a very hard and painful job. That includes being a painter or writer.
 I\'ve heard that a writter is the shortest life span cause of suffering from creating stories. 

>>> I\'ve heard writers have a short lifespan because they are too stressed out in creating stories.
 I really understand how hard and distressful to creat a peice is.
>>> I do understand how hard and distressful it is to create a piece.
It \'s hard to say What is the best job, because I konw that every job has its difficulty which we can never know before we work. 

>>> It\'s hard to consider what the best job is because every job has it\'s own difficulty which we can never know until we are there already.
Even a beggar should endure the outside weather changes and they have to put up with people\'s refusal or insultation.
>>> Even a beggar has to endure the rough outdoor weather and other people\'s refusals or insults.
Let\'s think lke that my job I chose is the best job in the world!

>>> I would just like to think that my job is the best job in the world!

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