homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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HOMEWORK:
When you write an essay, you learn to express yourself in a more logical way and also you develop your writing skills, your vocabulary and your own writing style. All these activities require outstanding writing skills, which can be developed only by writing essays, and practicing. :)
Writing Task:
Why is it important to take a medicine when we are sick? Explain your answer in not more than five (5) sentences. (beacause medicine is very important~ like my grandma.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elsa! ^_^
Thank you for doing your homework.
Taking medicine is important when we are sick because it helps us feel better.
See you again on Monday beautiful. :*
~Teacher Charry ^_^v
beacause medicine is very important~
>> Taking medicine is very important.
like my grandma.^^
>> It\'s important for my grandma because she is sick.
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