Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
Practice making your sentences more direct and simpler.
It would be easier to understand that way.
Eliminate the use of unnecessary words.
Learn how to get to the point.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, If I understand the meaning correctly, then I feel not bad about conversations with older people.
>> If I understood it correctly, I don\'t feel bad when I\'m speaking with older people.
Conversation means talking, (Am I right?) and what bad things will happen if I talk to a people who is older than me?
>> Is there something bad that could happen if I talk to a person who is older than me?
Of course I feel a bit uncomfortable whill I talk with A older person, but it\'s feeling is similar with the feeling of when I talk to a person who I don\'t know.
>> Of course I feel a bit uncomfortable when I talk with an older person, but it\'s just like when I\'m talking to a person whom I don\'t know.
And when I get used to the person, I feel comfortable whil talking to the person.
> When I become more familiar with the person, I would feel a lot more comfortable.
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