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Hi [이름]!
This is a very inspiring composition! ^^
Thank you for sharing this.
I hope to see you in our next class.
~~t. Ally
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Even though we are not in touch right now, I had a teacher who taught me not only just knowledge but also life-cycle such as diligence.
>> Even though we are no longer in touch, I used to have a teacher who taught me not just knowledge but also life values, such as diligence.
He was a kind of tutor who visited my house and taught me mathmatics and science.
>> He was a tutor who visited our house and taught me Mathematics and Science.
It was really cruel to solve a hundred of math questions in every half a week, but it gave me a lot of confidence to follow a high school curriculum and stay diligent mind-state doing my works constantly.
>> It was really hard to solve a hundred math questions in every half a week, but it gave me a lot of confidence to follow a high school curriculum and stay in a diligent state of mind when doing my school works constantly.
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