homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is voting an important responsibility of a citizen? Why or why not?
-> Vote is very importnat.
Many people think the same.
Vote is power of citizen.
A candidate think lightly people if they don't vote.
Then we must vote and show to candidate , citizen is nog lightly
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong! Good morning to you! I am sorry. I didn\'t understand your last sentences.
But your answer is good. We give importance to democracy. ^^
~~May~~
Vote is very importnat.
>> Voting is important.
Many people think the same.
>> Many people think the same way.
Vote is power of citizen.
>> Votes of the citizens are powerful.
A candidate think lightly people if they don\'t vote.
Then we must vote and show to candidate , citizen is nog lightly
>>(I don\'t understand this sentence Seong. I\'m sorry!)
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