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Hey [이름]!

This is a very endearing composition. ^^

Thank you for sharing it with me.

Here are some corrections.

~~t. Ally

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Love is hard to define using just one sentence.

>> CORRECT!

 Because it\'s literal meaning is a mind that people can go with together
but you also know it is more than that.

>> Because its literal meaning is two minds coming together as one. But you also know it\'s more than just that.

 I think love is a power that trust someone, always think about that person and cheer me up.

>> I think love is a power that makes us trust someone, to make us think about think about that person, and allow them to cheer us up when we\'re down.

 I express my love to people indirectly. 

>> CORRECT!

 I try to share my everyting with them but sometimes I spell the love directly also.

>> I try to share everything with them, but sometimes, I give my love directly as well.