homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
When you write an essay, you learn to express yourself in a more logical way and also you develop your writing skills, your vocabulary and your own writing style. All these activities require outstanding writing skills, which can be developed only by writing essays, and practicing. :)
Writing Task:
What is a computer? Why do people need computers nowadays? Explain your answer in not more than five (5) sentences. [beacause computer is very good and very important~ so,many people and me like comeputer~!!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elsa! ^_^
Thank you for answering our question for today.
Computers are indeed important because they are very useful. :)
See you again on Wednesday.
Have a wonderful day!
~Teacher Charry :)
beacause computer is very good and very important~ so,many people and me like comeputer
>> A computer is very helpful and very important so many people like me like compters.
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