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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. In the Philippines, it\'s quite ideal for most people to have fair white skin. Most Filipinos have brown or tan skin because of the weather we have in our country. Filipinos are obsessed with whitening products. If you go to department stores of shopping malls, most products would be labeled \"whitening.\" :D
- T. Beth
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In my opinion, Hispanic people have ideal skin and face, so I\'m inclined not to understand why Korean people are ardent to white skin.
>>>> In my opinion, Hispanic people have ideal skin and face. I don\'t really understand why Koreans are ardent about having white skin.
Although I don\'t understand this, I think Korean people\'s face may look well with white skin.
>>>> CORRECT.
For example, after using a affect to get brighter for face in a photo, Korean people look more better than before.
>>>> For example, after using photo-shop or filtering effects for the face in a photo, Korean people look much better than before.
But, I think western people\'s face look well with Hispanic people\'s skin tone, therefore I consider Hispanic people may be ideal face in the world.
>>>> However, I think western people\'s face look well with Hispanic people\'s skin tone. This is why I think Hispanic people may have the ideal face in the world.
Hispanic people look like Asian or European so they have two race\'s advantages.
>>>> Hispanic people look like Asian or European so they have these two racial advantages.
However, individual races have each attractions so going on a trip is always fun for me.
>>>> OR: However, each race has its own charm so going on a trip is always fun for me.
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