homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
It snowed a lot in korea last Saturday.
It was the first snow in this winter.
I really wanted to show you.
But It also caused many troubles like traffic jam and dirty road. However It maked a beautiful scenery covering everything with white and glittering snow.
Enjoy the rest of your day!
ESSAY: If you were going on a twelve-hour flight and the only entertainment you could bring was a book, what book would you choose? Talk about your favorite book and why it would keep you entertained.
I'm going to bring 'The Empire of the Ants' wirrten by Beranard Werber.
The writter completed the book 120 times for past 12years and finally pubished the book in 1991.
The stroy is about the Ants and a man. \
The man inherited a house from his uncle who studied ants for his all life.
The man visited the house and found some place through the ants's nest and ..........
I was shocked and feared ants when I read the book.
If it's possible, I want to read again and recommend to you.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! It\'s true that I sort of miss your interesting stories. I guess most companies are indeed busy these days trying to finish everything before the end of the year. ^_^
I checked on that book, \'The Empire of the Ants\'. I\'m still checking on it. I can\'t decide what kind of book or story it is.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It snowed a lot in Korea last Saturday.
>>> Correct.
It was the first snow in this winter.
>>> Correct.
I really wanted to show you.
>>> Correct.
But it also caused many troubles like traffic jam and dirty road.
>>> But it also caused many troubles like traffic jams and dirty roads.
However It maked a beautiful scenery covering everything with white and glittering snow.
>>> However, it generally created a beautiful scenery of everything covered with the white and glittering snow.
Enjoy the rest of your day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: If you were going on a twelve-hour flight and the only entertainment you could bring was a book, what book would you choose? Talk about your favorite book and why it would keep you entertained.
I\'m going to bring \'The Empire of the Ants\' written by Beranard Werber.
>>> Correct.
The writer completed the book 120 times for past 12 years and finally published the book in 1991.
>>> Correct.
The stroy is about the Ants and a man.
>>> Correct.
The man inherited a house from his uncle who studied ants for his all life.
>>> The man inherited a house from his uncle who studied ants his entire life.
The man visited the house and found some place through the ants\'s nest and ..........
>>> When the man visited the house, he found an entrance to the ants\' nest and ..........
I was shocked and feared ants when I read the book.
>>> I was shocked and started fearing ants after reading the book.
If it\'s possible, I want to read again and recommend to you.
>>> If it\'s possible, I want to read it again and recommend it to you.
I checked on that book, \'The Empire of the Ants\'. I\'m still checking on it. I can\'t decide what kind of book or story it is.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
It snowed a lot in Korea last Saturday.
>>> Correct.
It was the first snow in this winter.
>>> Correct.
I really wanted to show you.
>>> Correct.
But it also caused many troubles like traffic jam and dirty road.
>>> But it also caused many troubles like traffic jams and dirty roads.
However It maked a beautiful scenery covering everything with white and glittering snow.
>>> However, it generally created a beautiful scenery of everything covered with the white and glittering snow.
Enjoy the rest of your day!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: If you were going on a twelve-hour flight and the only entertainment you could bring was a book, what book would you choose? Talk about your favorite book and why it would keep you entertained.
I\'m going to bring \'The Empire of the Ants\' written by Beranard Werber.
>>> Correct.
The writer completed the book 120 times for past 12 years and finally published the book in 1991.
>>> Correct.
The stroy is about the Ants and a man.
>>> Correct.
The man inherited a house from his uncle who studied ants for his all life.
>>> The man inherited a house from his uncle who studied ants his entire life.
The man visited the house and found some place through the ants\'s nest and ..........
>>> When the man visited the house, he found an entrance to the ants\' nest and ..........
I was shocked and feared ants when I read the book.
>>> I was shocked and started fearing ants after reading the book.
If it\'s possible, I want to read again and recommend to you.
>>> If it\'s possible, I want to read it again and recommend it to you.
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