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2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Tell me about your happiest birthday memory My birthday is july 19th and it is always middle of the rainy season. When I was high school student, it did not rain in six years. So I can play outside with friends. My friends gave me cakes, gifts and the most happiest thing was all of my best friends came to celebrate my birthday. Me and my bestfridens can meet only once in a year, so sometimes I miss those days .

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Wow! You were very lucky that year then. ^^

I\'m glad you were able to spend time with your best friends.


~~t. Ally




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My birthday is july 19th and it is always middle of the rainy season.

>> My birthday is on July 19th, and it is always in the middle of the rainy season.


When I was high school student, it did not rain in six years.

>> When I was in high school, it didn\'t rain for 6 years.


So I can play outside with friends. 

>> So I was able to play outside with my friends.


My friends gave me cakes, gifts and the most happiest thing was all of my best friends came to celebrate my birthday.

>> My friends gave me cakes and gifts, and the happiest thing was that all of my best friends came to celebrate my birthday with me.


Me and my bestfridens can meet only once in a year, so sometimes I miss those days .

>> Me and my best friends can only meet once a year, I sometimes I miss the old days.

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