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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this one. Car companies are releasing new models that would really attract buyers. This seems to be a successful release for Hyundai. I just Googled this model to check it out. :D
- T. Beth
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Hyundai had a release event of genesis brand\'s flagship model \'G90\' at hotel in Seoul on the 27th and begin to sell in earnest.
>>> Hyundai held an event for its genesis brand\'s flagship model \'G90\' at a hotel in Seoul on the 27th and began to sell rapidly.
G90 is facelift(part change) model of initial flagship model \'EQ900\' released in 2015.
>>> G90 is an upgraded version of the initial flagship model \'EQ900\' released in 2015.
>>> OR: G90 is a modified version of the initial flagship model \'EQ900\' released in 2015.
while releasing, its name was changed to G90 with the North America and the Middle East market.
>>> During its release, its name was changed to G90 in the North America and the Middle East market.
Hyundai president introduce as \"design philosophy of genesis and high-tech technology is included on G90\".
>>> Hyundai\'s president announced, \"design philosophy of genesis and high-tech technology are included on G90\".
This mean it include all abilities of Hyundai.
>>> This means it included all abilities of Hyundai.
Attraction in early stage is also successful.
>>> The attraction on its early stage was also successful.
Although G90 is facelift model, appearance and convenience spec were changed to new car\'s level tremendously.
>>> Although G90 is an altered version, its appearance and convenience specs were tremendously changed which makes it appear like a new car.
The whole design concept is \'dynamic elegance\'.
>>> CORRECT.
Especially, the front part is very changed.
>>> Especially, the front part was completely changed.
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