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2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> I translate news because homework is not presented. Hyundai had a release event of genesis brand's flagship model 'G90' at hotel in Seoul on the 27th and begin to sell in earnest. G90 is facelift(part change) model of initial flagship model 'EQ900' released in 2015. while releasing, its name was changed to G90 with the North America and the Middle East market. Hyundai president introduce as "design philosophy of genesis and high-tech technology is included on G90". This mean it include all abilities of Hyundai. Attraction in early stage is also successful. Although G90 is facelift model, appearance and convenience spec were changed to new car's level tremendously. The whole design concept is 'dynamic elegance'. Especially, the front part is very changed.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this one. Car companies are releasing new models that would really attract buyers. This seems to be a successful release for Hyundai. I just Googled this model to check it out. :D

- T. Beth

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Hyundai had a release event of genesis brand\'s flagship model \'G90\' at hotel in Seoul on the 27th and begin to sell in earnest.

>>>  Hyundai held an event for its genesis brand\'s flagship model \'G90\' at a hotel in Seoul on the 27th and began to sell rapidly.  

G90 is facelift(part change) model of initial flagship model \'EQ900\' released in 2015.

>>>  G90 is an upgraded version of the initial flagship model \'EQ900\' released in 2015.  

>>> OR: G90 is a modified version of the initial flagship model \'EQ900\' released in 2015.   

while releasing, its name was changed to G90 with the North America and the Middle East market.

>>> During its release, its name was changed to G90 in the North America and the Middle East market. 

Hyundai president introduce as \"design philosophy of genesis and high-tech technology is included on G90\".

>>> Hyundai\'s president announced, \"design philosophy of genesis and high-tech technology are included on G90\".   

This mean it include all abilities of Hyundai.

>>> This means it included all abilities of Hyundai.  

Attraction in early stage is also successful.

>>>  The attraction on its early stage was also successful.  

Although G90 is facelift model, appearance and convenience spec were changed to new car\'s level tremendously.

>>> Although G90 is an altered version, its appearance and convenience specs were tremendously changed which makes it appear like a new car.  

The whole design concept is \'dynamic elegance\'.

>>>  CORRECT. 

Especially, the front part is very changed.

>>> Especially, the front part was completely changed.  


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