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Hi Ms. [이름]! I feel bad that you got addicted to smoking. ^_^ Let me tell you my story. I was also in the university when I saw the other students smoking. It got me really curious. You know how it was. ^_^ At that time, I thought it was a cool thing to smoke. So to cut the story short, I tried it too. However, it had a bad taste and it made my mouth dry so I didn\'t do it the second  or third time. ^_^ I was then wondering why people smoke. Ha ha ha.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
 It\'s a sunny and a clean day.
>>> Correct. 

>>>  It\'s a sunny and clear day.  
 I want to go out side and take a walk for a while to refresh.
>>>  I want to go out side and take a walk for a while to refresh my mind and spirit.
 otherwise, I need a nap to recover my conditions. hihi
>>> On the other hand, I need a nap to recover from my condition. 
 Have a nice day!
>>> Correct.  
 ESSAY: Do you have any annoying habits? How did it start? How will you overcome that?
 I think, I have many bad habits - smoking, drinking, shopping, picking my hair and turning on TV though I don\'t watch.
>>>  I think, I have many bad habits like smoking, drinking, shopping, picking my hair and turning on the TV though I won\'t be watching.
 Here is a stroy how I started smoking.
>>> Here is the story on how I started smoking.  
 I was 21 years old and a university students.
>>> I was  then 21 years old and a university student.  
 When vacation came, I worked at a small restaurant as a part time job.
>>> Correct.  
 One of my co-worker smoked a lot at that times. so I asked him why he smoked and how to smoke.
>>>   One of my co-workers smoked a lot at that time so I asked him why he smoked and how to smoke.
 He showed me how to smoke and gave me a one cigarette.
>>> He taught me how to smoke and gave me one stick to try on.  
 The cigarette was the first smoke in my life.
>>> That was my first smoking experience.  
 I\'m really regretting starting smoking now and want to stop smoking.
>>> I really regret that time because now, I wish I could stop smoking.  
 I know that smoking has only demerits.
>>> Correct.  
 I wish there is a pill for stop smoking.
>>> I wish there is a pill to help/make me stop smoking.   
 When you don\'t start smoking, you don\'t need to stop smoking. 
>>> When you don\'t start smoking, you don\'t have to stop smoking.