Homework

Hi Sir [이름]! Thank you for completing your homework. I think that I agree with your opinion. Balance is everything. Anyway, check below for some corrections I made on your work. Have a great day! ~~T. Dee

I always try to get enough sleep.
Because the rack of sleep causes inconvenience to the work of the next day.
But when I have a lot of work that should be completed by the day, I can’t get enough sleep.
In this case, I take enough rest on the weekend.
The rest includes the sleeping.
It is very important that to get enough sleep for the health,
Although too much sleep can be bad for the health, regular enough sleep is good for the health.

I always try to get enough sleep.
Because the lack of sleep causes inconvenience to any work for the next day.
But when I have a lot of work that should be completed within the day, I can’t get enough sleep.
In this case, I take enough rest on the weekend instead.
I rest mostly by sleeping.
It is very important to get enough sleep for our health.
Too much sleep can be bad for the health but just enough regular sleep is good for the health.