Homework

Hello Seong Won!

Maybe, you can focus more on spelling and the use of conjunctions.

Avoid using \"but\" in the beginning of a sentence when you are writing.

All the other sentences look good.

Keep it up!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I can\'t remember the first time I used in ternet.
>> I can\'t remember the first time I used the Internet.
But the first memory at using internet I have is watching webtoon.
>> However, my first memory of using the Internet was when I watched a web toon.
I was watching webtoon using computer.
>> I watched a web toon using a computer.
What I thought was \'Oh, this is fun.\'.
>> I thought that it was so much fun.
The webtoon is end few weeks ago, but I sometimes watch it again.

>> The web toon already ended a few weeks ago but I sometimes watch it again.