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2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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In my opinion most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. I think that the good things aren\'t always good and the bad things aren\'t always bad. It depends on my mind. So, I try to think positively whatever I experienced or whoever I met up. In addition, all I experienced help me develop myself. The thought I had when I was in bad situation and the emotion I had back then make me more adult. So, all things that I experienced are valuable.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Thank you for submitting your composition to me. I appreciate your answer. Just like you, I also think that the experiences we have especially the most difficult ones would help us to learn in life and become better individuals.


Have a good night and take care!


~Teacher Gina



In my opinion most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. I think that the good things aren\'t always good and the bad things aren\'t always bad. It depends on my mind. So, I try to think positively whatever I experienced or whoever I met up. In addition, all I experienced help me develop myself. The thought I had when I was in bad situation and the emotion I had back then make me more adult. So, all things that I experienced are valuable.


>> In my opinion most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. I think that the good things aren\'t always good and the bad things aren\'t always bad. It depends on my mind. So, I try to think positively with whatever experience I have or whoever I meet up. In addition, all I experienced help me develop myself. The thought and emotion I had when I was in a bad situation back then made me to become more mature. So, all the things that I experienced were valuable.

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