homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
You are so clsed with your family and always role a big part in your family party. I imainge that you amuse them with your vivid voice.
I will tell you a funny story for you.
I wish you tell them to have fun.
A doctor, a lawyer, a little boy and a priest were out for a Sunday afternoon flight on a small private plane. Suddenly, the plane developed engine trouble.
In spite of the best efforts of the pilot, the plane started to go down. Finally, the pilot grabbed a parachute, yelled to the passengers that they had better jump, and bailed out.
Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes remaining.
The doctor grabbed one and said "I'm a doctor, I save lives, so I must live," and jumped out.
The lawyer then said, "I'm a lawyer and lawyers are the smartest people in the world. I deserve to live."
He also grabbed a parachute and jumped.
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강사 첨삭
Hello Julia! Don\'t worry much about how many words you are using in here. Just try to express your thoughts freely. ^_^ Ohhh! I like stories! Keep them coming Ms. [이름]! ^_^ T\'was really funny! It has a lesson, I guess.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
You are so clsed with your family and always role a big part in your family party.
>>> You are close with your family and you play an important role for them.
I imainge that you amuse them with your vivid voice.
>>> I can imagine that you amuse them with your clear voice.
I will tell you a funny story for you.
>>> Let me share with you a funny story.
I wish you tell them to have fun.
>>> I wish all of you will enjoy the event.
A doctor, a lawyer, a little boy and a priest were out for a Sunday afternoon flight on a small private plane.
>>> Correct.
Suddenly, the plane developed engine trouble.
>>> Correct.
In spite of the best efforts of the pilot, the plane started to go down.
>>> Correct.
Finally, the pilot grabbed a parachute, yelled to the passengers that they had better jump, and bailed out.
>>> Correct.
Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes remaining.
>>> Correct.
>>> Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes left.
The doctor grabbed one and said \"I\'m a doctor, I save lives, so I must live,\" and jumped out.
>>> Correct.
The lawyer then said, \"I\'m a lawyer and lawyers are the smartest people in the world. I deserve to live.\"
>>> Correct.
He also grabbed a parachute and jumped.
>>> Correct.
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~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
You are so clsed with your family and always role a big part in your family party.
>>> You are close with your family and you play an important role for them.
I imainge that you amuse them with your vivid voice.
>>> I can imagine that you amuse them with your clear voice.
I will tell you a funny story for you.
>>> Let me share with you a funny story.
I wish you tell them to have fun.
>>> I wish all of you will enjoy the event.
A doctor, a lawyer, a little boy and a priest were out for a Sunday afternoon flight on a small private plane.
>>> Correct.
Suddenly, the plane developed engine trouble.
>>> Correct.
In spite of the best efforts of the pilot, the plane started to go down.
>>> Correct.
Finally, the pilot grabbed a parachute, yelled to the passengers that they had better jump, and bailed out.
>>> Correct.
Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes remaining.
>>> Correct.
>>> Unfortunately, there were only three parachutes left.
The doctor grabbed one and said \"I\'m a doctor, I save lives, so I must live,\" and jumped out.
>>> Correct.
The lawyer then said, \"I\'m a lawyer and lawyers are the smartest people in the world. I deserve to live.\"
>>> Correct.
He also grabbed a parachute and jumped.
>>> Correct.
1000 words TT to be continued now
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