homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The priest looked at the little boy and said, "My son, I've lived a long and full life. You are young and have your whole life ahead of you. Take the last parachute and live in peace."
The little boy handed the parachute back to the priest and said,
"Not to worry, Father. The 'smartest man in the world' just took off with my back pack."
Do you like it?
I read this story when I was a high school girls in my English grammer book.
I searched it in internet for you though it takes time for a while. hihi
This is really my pleasure!I
I am interested today's homework, Please give me another chance to compose the same topic next week.
PS- I try to find another composition board to write, but there is just one board for one day. I use this tomorrow compostion board for you.
It's OK, you cannot read my composiotn tomorrow.
Have a wonder time tomorrow with your big family!
강사 첨삭
Oh! I also asked the admin regarding the composition board and they indeed confirmed that clients can only use one board in a day and it will have to be a maximum of 1,000 words only. ^_^ Sorry about that. Thanks for sharing this short interesting story. ^_^
~T. Irene~
The priest looked at the little boy and said, \"My son, I\'ve lived a long and full life. You are young and have your whole life ahead of you. Take the last parachute and live in peace.\"
>>> Correct.
The little boy handed the parachute back to the priest and said,
\"Not to worry, Father. The \'smartest man in the world\' just took off with my back pack.\"
>>> Correct.
Do you like it?
>>> Correct.
I read this story when I was a high school girls in my English grammer book.
>>> I read this story when I was a high school girl from my English grammar book.
I searched it in internet for you though it takes time for a while. hihi
>>> I searched it on the internet for you though it took me a while. hihi
This is really my pleasure!I
>>> Correct.
>>> This is really my happiness.
I am interested today\'s homework, Please give me another chance to compose the same topic next week.
>>> Correct.
PS- I try to find another composition board to write, but there is just one board for one day.
>>> PS- I tried to find another composition board to write in, but there is just one board for one day.
I use this tomorrow compostion board for you.
>>> I used tomorrow\'s composition board for you.
It\'s OK, you cannot read my composiotn tomorrow.
>>> It\'s OK. Anyway, you won\'t be reading my composition tomorrow.
Have a wonder time tomorrow with your big family!
>>> Correct.
~T. Irene~
The priest looked at the little boy and said, \"My son, I\'ve lived a long and full life. You are young and have your whole life ahead of you. Take the last parachute and live in peace.\"
>>> Correct.
The little boy handed the parachute back to the priest and said,
\"Not to worry, Father. The \'smartest man in the world\' just took off with my back pack.\"
>>> Correct.
Do you like it?
>>> Correct.
I read this story when I was a high school girls in my English grammer book.
>>> I read this story when I was a high school girl from my English grammar book.
I searched it in internet for you though it takes time for a while. hihi
>>> I searched it on the internet for you though it took me a while. hihi
This is really my pleasure!I
>>> Correct.
>>> This is really my happiness.
I am interested today\'s homework, Please give me another chance to compose the same topic next week.
>>> Correct.
PS- I try to find another composition board to write, but there is just one board for one day.
>>> PS- I tried to find another composition board to write in, but there is just one board for one day.
I use this tomorrow compostion board for you.
>>> I used tomorrow\'s composition board for you.
It\'s OK, you cannot read my composiotn tomorrow.
>>> It\'s OK. Anyway, you won\'t be reading my composition tomorrow.
Have a wonder time tomorrow with your big family!
>>> Correct.
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