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2018-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What are you thankful for in the month of November? The most thankful thing is that I went to the picnic with people from the church, so that I could reduce the stress of anxiety when I saw the green nature. And thankfully the weather is getting better these days, so I feel not very cold. The last thing that I feel good is that I could have time to do my artwork, although it is very slow.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


I\'m so glad that you\'re happy with your church mates ^^

I hope it continues for a very long time!

I am so happy to see your artworks too.

They\'re all so wonderful. <3


~~t. Ally



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The most thankful thing is that I went to the picnic with people from the church, so that I could reduce the stress of anxiety when I saw the green nature. 

>> I am most thankful for being able to go on a picnic in a very natural venue with the people from my church, so that I could reduce my stress and anxiety.


 And thankfully the weather is getting better these days, so I feel not very cold.

>> And I am thankful for the weather because these days, it\'s getting better and I don\'t feel very cold anymore.


 The last thing that I feel good is that I could have time to do my artwork, although it is very slow.

>> The last thing that I feel good about is that I now have a lot of time to do my artwork,  although the progress is quite slow.

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