homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong! Good morning! I know that you are a happy person.
I am also happy. I don\'t work on weekends. Many people, including you,
want to have a lot of free time but they can\'t because they need
to go to work. Just be patient. Many people also don\'t have a job and have no money.
You\'re just lucky because you earn by yourself. ^^
~~May~~
I think 50% happy than my frinends.
>> I think that I am happier than my friends.
They are study hard and play free.
But they don\'t earn money.
>> They study hard and they can play freely but they don\'t earn money.
they can work part time job but not earn many.
>> They have a part-time job but they don\'t earn a lot.
I earn money but don\'t play weekday, because i am very tired.
>> I earn money but I don\'t play on weekdays because I am very tired.
In fact, i want to play.
>> CORRECT
this time I envy them but I don\'t think i have small happy than they.
>> I envy them but I don\'t think that they are happier than me.
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