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2018-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I think 50% happy than my frinends. They are study hard and play free. But they don't earn money. they can work part time job but not earn many. I earn money but don't play weekday, because i am very tired. In fact, i want to play. this time I envy them but I don't think i have small happy than they.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong! Good morning! I know that you are a happy person.

I am also happy. I don\'t work on weekends. Many people, including you,

want to have a lot of free time but they can\'t because they need

to go to work. Just be patient. Many people also don\'t have a job and have no money.

You\'re just lucky because you earn by yourself. ^^

~~May~~

I think 50% happy than my frinends.

>> I think that I am happier than my friends.
 They are study hard and play free.

But they don\'t earn money.

>> They study hard and they can play freely but they don\'t earn money.
 they can work part time job but not earn many.
>> They have a part-time job but they don\'t earn a lot.
I earn money but don\'t play weekday, because i am very tired.
>> I earn money but I don\'t play on weekdays because I am very tired.
In fact, i want to play.

>> CORRECT
 this time I envy them but I don\'t think i have small happy than they.

>> I envy them but I don\'t think that they are happier than me.

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