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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. Every season definitely has its own charm. Fall season may be a season of sorrows but it also has it\'s charm. The fallen leaves may look sad but it also looks beautiful and sentimental. :)

- T. Beth

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I think fallen leaves is the main factor among various factors which induce sorrow feeling for people.

>>>>  I think fallen leaves is the main factor among various factors which induces a sorrow feeling to people.

While seeing trees that all leaves are fallen, I also feel sorrow and emptiness.

>>>> While seeing trees with leaves all fallen, I also feel sorrow and emptiness.   

But, in the people who have a partner, this season is good for them.

>>>> However, for people who have a partner, this season is good for them.   

Although they feel sorrow also, they can lean on each partners.

>>>> Although they might also feel sorrow, they can lean on each other. 

This phenomenon get more remarkable while season is changed to winter.

>>>> This phenomenon gets more remarkable when the season changes to winter.    

Especially, in Christmas when buildings and streets are adorned with light or adornment, people with no partner feel more sorrow and lonely.

>>>> Especially in Christmas when buildings and streets are adorned with lights or other decors, people with no partner feel more sorrow and loneliness.    

So, these days new spending pattern is popular in Korea, which is for solo people to spend on luxury entertainment for themselves in order to forget sorrow feeling.

>>>> These days, a new spending pattern is popular in Korea where single people spend on luxury entertainment for themselves in order to forget about their sorrow feeling.