Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q.What are your thoughts on the Micro dust situation in Korea right now?
A.It's so bad.Because the fine dust is so bad when our school lunch hour, I can't play dodge ball outside.So I hope the fine dust disappears.
강사 첨삭
Hey Cat!
I hope you wear a mask when you go out, it\'s very unsafe to go outdoors nowadays.
I feel sad that you can\'t play outside. :(
I hope the weather gets better soon.
~~t. Ally
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It\'s so bad.Because the fine dust is so bad when our school lunch hour, I can\'t play dodge ball outside.
>> It\'s so bad because the fine dust gets really bad during our school\'s lunch hour, I can\'t play dodge ball outside.
So I hope the fine dust disappears.
>> CORRECT!
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