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2018-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

If I could be a _______________ for a day, I would _______________. If I could be a witch for a day, I would travel all around using teleportation. I want to eat many foreign dishes, go sightseeing. Sometimes I really envy Harry Poter that he can do teleportation.

강사 첨삭

I love that idea, [이름]!


I want to do that as well. ^^

Exactly!

I wish we had powers too.


~~t. Ally


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If I could be a witch for a day, I would travel all around using teleportation.

>> CORRECT!


 I want to eat many foreign dishes, go sightseeing.

>> I want to eat many foreign dishes and go sightseeing.


 Sometimes I really envy Harry Poter that he can do teleportation.

>> Sometimes I really envy Harry Potter for having the ability to teleport.

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