homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Frist , I and korean will think that system is right.
But they are think diffrent meaning, thay don't think "investing in the future".
well that system good point is guaranteed to old age.
But bad pint is not certain.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for doing your homework Seong! See you later. ^^
~~May~~
Frist , I and korean will think that system is right.
>> First of all, Koreans (including me) think that this system is right.
But they are think diffrent meaning, thay don\'t think \"investing in the future\".
>> But some of them think that it is not about \"investing in the future\".
well that system good point is guaranteed to old age.
But bad pint is not certain.
>> This system is only guaranteed for the elderly, although there are some bad points about it.
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