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2018-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, I am a fan of one actor, but I don't want to spend a day with him. I think I want him just to exist in videos. But I really want his sign and picture, so if I spend time with him, I think I will take a picture of him using right hand, and give him a paper to sign on using left hand. I think I don't need a day spend with him. I think 10 minutes is enough.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

Practice making simple and clear sentences.

I admire how you structure your sentences.

You have a good grasp of subject-verb agreement.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, I am a fan of one actor, but I don\'t want to spend a day with him.
>> Correct
I think I want him just to exist in videos.
>> I think I want him to exist only in the videos that I watch.
But I really want his sign and picture, so if I spend time with him, I think I will take a picture of him using right hand, and give him a paper to sign on using left hand.
>> However, I do want to get his autograph and take a picture with him.

so if I spend time with him, I think I will take a picture of him using right hand, and give him a paper to sign on using left hand.

>> If I get the chance to spend some time with him, I will take his picture using my right hand and get his autograph using my left hand. 
I think I don\'t need a day spend with him.

>> I don\'t think I need to spend an entire day with him.

I think 10 minutes is enough.

>> Correct

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