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My most valued possession is sell Phone because I can call anyone and if I bored I can play games.
>> One of my most valued possessions is my cellphone because I can call if I\'m bored and I can use it for playing games.
Also I always brings the rubix cube.
>> Also, I always bring my Rubik\'s cube.
In school\'s reces or lunch time, I solve cubes with my friends.
>> I solve it with my friends during recess or at lunch time.
I have 4 cubes in my home.
>> I have 4 Rubik\'s cubes at home.
It is my birthday soon.
>> My birthday is coming up soon.
So I would like to get my birthday present Iphone or Mix up cube.
>> So, I would like to have an iPhone or a mix up cube as my present.
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