homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]. You are a giver! ^_^ It\'s nice to hear that.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
I am very excited whenever we talk about diverse issues.
>>> Correct.
You always make me ponder upon the issues around me.
>>> Correct.
You are not only an English teacher but also a mentor to me.
>>> Correct.
See you tomorrow!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: It\'s Christmas month so there will be a lot of gift-giving and receiving. What is the best present you’ve ever given? How about the worst gift that you got?
I am usually the person who gives the present rather than receives a gift.
>>> I am usually the type of person who gives presents rather than the other way around.
Every Christmas, I bought Christams cakes for my friends and relatives.
>>> Every Christmas, I buy Christmas cakes for my friends and relatives.
Although doing this job is my pleasure, somtimes, I feel that it is difficult and annoys me, because I have to reserve the cakes to the bakery 4 or 5 days before Christmas.and I pick them in my car. and then I have to deliver the cakes with handwritten cards to all of them.
>>> Although this pleasures me, it also sometimes annoys and is quite difficult for me. Well, I have to make reservations with the bakery 4 to 5 days before Christmas. Then I have to pick them up with my car and deliver them with handwritten cards that I have to personally make.
I may repeat this job in this Chrstmas and tell them \'It\'s my pleasure\'
>>> I may have to do this again this Christmas. I have to write how happy I am doing this for them.
I am sure that there is no worst gift that I got.
>>> I can\'t think of the worst gift that I received.
I am the person who feel happy with that even if it\'s a only Chrismas card.
>>> I feel happy receiving anything even if it\'s merely a Christmas card.
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