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1. In order to impart the healthy exchange of ideas, organizers of the symposium scheduled_ the meeting of many great minds
>>> In order to encourage the healthy exchange of ideas, organizers of the symposium facilitated the meeting of many great minds.
2. The actors were exhausted after multiple performances of the forgettable play. No matter how hard they tried to make the show come to life, their audiences continually withheld applause
>>> correct
3. During cellular division. genetic material is replicated at an astounding rate
>>> During cellular breakdown genetic material is constructed at an astounding rate.
4. The archeological information gathered from the new excavation was exciting; ot corroborated many old theories that had been previously held in question, and discounted those which had been accepted as true.
>>> The archeological information gathered from the new excavation was infuriating; ot corroborated many old theories that had been previously held in question, and discounted those which had been accepted as true.
5. Although we made payments each week, the loan took a very long time tofinance due to a high rate of funding
>>> Although we made payments each week, the loan took a very long time to repay due to a high rate of interest.
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