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학생이 쓴 원문
It is very simple.
When I was sick, I am very hard.
A high fever , back pain , ankle and knee etc, if you are sick , you will be tired, sad and depressed , because I do too.
Also every people will want very health life.
And me too.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong! So take care of yourself then and live a happy and healthy life. ^^
~~May~~
It is very simple.
>> CORRECT GRAMMAR
When I was sick, I am very hard.
>> It was very hard because I was sick.
A high fever , back pain , ankle and knee etc, if you are sick , you will be tired, sad and depressed , because I do too.
>> I had a high fever, back pain, ankle and knee pain, etc. If you are sick, you will fee tired and depressed. I\'ve experienced that.
Also every people will want very health life.
>> Also, all people want to have a healthy lifestyle.
And me too.
>> And so do I.
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