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2018-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I never gotten angry at a worker in a store or a restaurant. There were no situations enough to make me be angry to a workers. But a convenience store's owner which is near at my house is a bit unkind, so I don't go there frequently. And I don't no what to write here anymore.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

It\'s good that you are always in control of your emotions.

You have described your feelings well.

Please take note of the proper use of \'but\" and \"however.\"

Keep practicing!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I never gotten angry at a worker in a store or a restaurant.
>> I have never gotten angry at a worker in a store or a restaurant.
There were no situations enough to make me be angry to a workers.
>> There were no situations bad enough to make me angry at workers.
But a convenience store\'s owner which is near at my house is a bit unkind, so I don\'t go there frequently.

>> However, there\'s a convenience store owner near my house who is a bit unkind, so I don\'t go there frequently.

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