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2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I stayed 15years in my city. I don't know uncomfortable a public transportation. But recently I realize uncomfortable. First, The bus don't go alley deep. Second , Usally it is not , but some bus dispatch interval is not good. also I think just fix two

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong! Thanks for doing your homework. How was your bus trip this morning?

For me, I take a taxi and jeepney everyday. lol

~~May~~

I stayed 15years in my city.

>> I stayed for 15 years in my city.
I don\'t know uncomfortable a public transportation.
>> I don\'t know if it\'s really convenient to take a public transportation.
But recently I realize uncomfortable.
>> But recently, I felt uncomfortable.
First, The bus don\'t go alley deep.
>> The buses don\'t go to the deep alley.
Second , Usally it is not , but some bus dispatch interval is not good.
>> Usually they don\'t but there are still some buses in which their dispatching is not good.

also I think just fix two

>> I think only two issues should be managed well.

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