Homework

2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework 1. Sandra has so many tiresome chores to do for her family. She feels as though they are a constant work 2. I don't like carbonated beverages. So, I often drink juice or water 3. Tyrants demand that others do their wishes, while socialists take a softer approach, considering the individual interests of all others 4. Reggie thought he had finished his fight with lung cancer, but unfortunately the disease had already spread to other parts of his body 5. Although the president's advisors often disagreed with him, they rarely supported his decisions From..Lainey Thank you for teaching me I am happy you were able to talk to you I want to continue study with the teacher I will need a lot of your help I am missing you see you on Friday Good night to. Anny

강사 첨삭

Hi Anny^^


Happy Thursday. I always enjoy talking to you, you always make me laugh :) Don\'t worry we will work together to achieve all of your goals okay? I miss you too. I will see you again tomorrow...\\m/...

*** Don\'t forget your stops or periods ( . ) when you make your sentences.


T. Lainey <\",)))><


1. Sandra has so many tiresome chores to do for her family. She feels as though they are a constant work

>>> Sandra has so many tiresome chores to do for her family. She feels as though they are a burden.

 2. I don\'t like carbonated beverages. So, I often drink juice or water

>>> correct

 3. Tyrants demand that others do their wishes, while socialists take a softer approach, considering the individual interests of all others

>>> Tyrants demand that others do their wishes, while diplomats take a softer approach, considering the 

individual interests of all others.

 4. Reggie thought he had finished his fight with lung cancer, but unfortunately the disease had already spread to other parts of his body

>>> correct

 5. Although the president\'s advisors often disagreed with him, they rarely supported his decisions

>>> Although the president\'s advisors often disagreed with him, they rarely criticized his decisions.

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