Homework

Hi Sir [이름]! Thank you for completing your homework today. It\'s good to know that Koreans are engaged in several sports. I can tell that you know a lot about sports. Anyway, check below for some corrections I made on your work. You have no problem with grammar but you have to be careful with the arrangement of the elements in your sentences and the choice of words in your sentences. Have a great weekend!~~T.Dee

The most popular sport is baseball in Korea. 

>>The most popular sport  in Korea is baseball. 
Professional Baseball is the most spectator sport among all sports in Korea.

>>Professional Baseball gathers the most sport spectators among all sports in Korea.
The second is soccer and the next are volleyball and basketball, they are held in winter.

>>The second is soccer and the next in rank are volleyball and basketball which are held in winter.
But the games of the national soccer team are very popular.

>>But still the games of Korea\'s national soccer team are also very popular.
Tickets are often sold out for national soccer games.

>>Tickets are often sold out during the national soccer games.
Especially, people have a great interest in the game between the Korean team and the teams ranked higher than Korea.

>>Koreans pay much interest when the game is between the Korean team and any other team ranked higher than Korea.
So am I.

>>So do I. 

If I can’t see the live broadcast, I watch the highlights of the game on the internet even late.

>>If I can’t watch the live broadcast, I will instead watch the highlights of the game on the internet although the game has ended.
Personally I enjoy golf the most.

>>But personally I enjoy playing golf the most.