homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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This day, Our country were unemployment percentage rises.
>> One day, our country\'s unemployment rate will rise.
and Prices go on upward.
>> Prices will also increase.
Future is darkness.
>> Our future is dark.
but I try to change the country future.
>> I want my country to have a better future.
I am going to the right choice in the election.
>> I am gong to make the right choice during the election.
I will select the politicians for the people.
>> I will select the politician who cares for the people.
What if I select the right, Our country could be good at future.
>> If I select the right person, our country might have a good future.
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