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2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Usually my mom buy my clothes, so I don't know how expensive my clothes are. At November 9th, SPAO released the clothings collaborationed with <Harry Potter>, but I failed buying it on time. I'm waiting for SPAO to release it again. Luckly, it will be release again in December.

강사 첨삭

Hello Seong Won!

Thank you for working hard this week.

Please take note of the proper position of adverbs in a sentence.

Always be careful of the use of prepositions.

We\'ll talk more about these in class.

Have a great weekend!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Usually my mom buy my clothes, so I don\'t know how expensive my clothes are.
>> My mom usually buys my clothes so I don\'t know how expensive they are.
At November 9th, SPAO released the clothings collaborationed with <Harry Potter>, but I failed buying it on time.
>> On November 9th, SPAO released a line of clothing featuring \"Harry Potter\" but I failed to buy it on time.
I\'m waiting for SPAO to release it again.
>> Correct
Luckly, it will be release again in December.

>> Luckily, it will be released again in December.

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