Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
Your composition made me laugh once again.^^
Let me remind you that putting \"ing\" after a verb makes it a noun when used as the subject of a sentence.
You can apply this rule in the sentences you will make in the future.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think just walk away is the best way.
>> I think walking away is the best option.
If I argue with someone, I will fill stressful, so it isn\'t good for my spirit\'s helth.(?)
>> If I argue with someone, I will feel stressed so it\'s not good for my spiritual health.
I think stress can reduce a person\'s lifespan.
>> Correct
I want to live long life, so I will not argue with someone.
>> I want to live a long life so I will not argue with anyone.
Except for my sister, of course.
>> My sister is the exception of course.
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