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2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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If you could get rid of one season of the year, what season would you get rid of? Why? I want to get rid of spring. I like summer and winter. In the fall I can see the red-yellows leaves. But the spring, I can't see anything. So,I want to get rid of spring.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for your homework. Please take note of my corrections. Have a good day!

~T. Kelly^^

If you could get rid of one season of the year, what season would you get rid of? Why?

I want to get rid of spring.

>> Correct.

I like summer and winter.
>> Correct.

In the fall I can see the red-yellows leaves.

>> In fall, I can see red and yellow leaves.

But the spring, I can\'t see anything.

>> But in spring, I can\'t see changes in the color of the leaves.

So, I want to get rid of spring.
>> Correct.

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