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2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 May

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A TRIP TO LONDON Last week I drove to London by car. As there was an accident on the M25 I had to take a detour. I stopped in front of a theater to ask for directions. A young man told me to turn right at the intersections and ask again at the gas station. There a friendly sales clerk told me to take the second exit of the traffic circle. After I had passed a crosswalk, I saw a bookstore and a large parking lot. I parked my car there and walked to the center of London. (Is the other word British English word?)

강사 첨삭

Great job [이름]! Yes, the other words are British English. We often use American English.
~~May~~
Last week I drove to London by car. As there was an accident on the M25 I had to take a detour.
>> DETOUR (CORRECT)
I stopped in front of a theater to ask for directions.
>> THEATER (CORRECT)
A young man told me to turn right at the intersections
>> INTERSECTION (CORRECT)
and ask again at the gas station.
>> GAS STATION (CORRECT)
There a friendly sales clerk told me to take the second exit of the traffic circle.
>> SALES CLERK/TRAFFIC CIRCLE (CORRECT)
After I had passed a crosswalk, I saw a bookstore
>> CROSSWALK/BOOKSTORE (CORRECT)
and a large parking lot.
>> PARKING LOT (CORRECT)
I parked my car there and walked to the center of London.
>> CENTER (CORRECT)

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